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dustinzgirl
06-12-2004, 01:18 AM
I Wore a Red Dress.

I wore a red dress to my funeral,
strapless and low into my bosom.
I step lightly through the moony grass,
and lay a pale kiss on an angels breast.

I tied a white ribbon to my hair,
wound it through my plaited braid.
I wait for the sun to warm my skin,
but only cold and rain answer me.

I don't know why you will not answer,
my own tears fall slowly like living ice.
I wipe the sting from my painted eyes,
and bow my head to the wet earth.

I wonder if you like this dress now,
once you said I was your princess.
I clutch the earth above your head,
and wish I knew if you thought of me still.

I wore a red dress to my funeral,
and those I knew once embraced me.
I watched as they left in slow limosines,
and laid my head to rest upon your grave.

gehtfuct
06-17-2004, 12:09 AM
Very thought provoking.Well writen and a cool idea.
Sorry i have'nt given a review thus far.After all I am blind and illiterate.
Ha!.....

dustinzgirl
06-18-2004, 12:41 AM
Very thought provoking.Well writen and a cool idea.

Thanks! Always looking for outside input/constructive critisism on my writing.

Sorry i have'nt given a review thus far.After all I am blind and illiterate.
Ha!.....

whatever!