Anyone Else Write Poetry

[_Kitana_]

I really hate people who don't know how to write poetry and yet still call themselves a poet. I mean i may not be the best but at least my poems have some style and structure to them. What the hell is with these 5 mins poems with simple words and basically poor flow... at least read a poem once in your fucking life, before you try to write one...
:mad:

[Broken]

I really hate people who don't know how to write poetry and yet still call themselves a poet. I mean i may not be the best but at least my poems have some style and structure to them. What the hell is with these 5 mins poems with simple words and basically poor flow... at least read a poem once in your fucking life, before you try to write one...
:mad:

Fuck!

[Unforgiven]

I'm a poet... here's my masterpiece:

Life's a bitch
then you die
so fuck the world
let's all get high

[_Kitana_]

Fuck it... post your shit... here a new one of mine!

~~~~untitled~~~~~~~

Immoral thoughts formed in the night
of wicked words and fears unleashed
for a love still felt, but ever fleeting from the light.

Now this to ponder on
with cherry scares from a dull blade
And horrors reveled in summers dawn.

One slice, just profound enough,
maybe even another
from an idle hand not to tough.

Thus how one does spiral so young
into a meaningless indulgent
Of life with a viral tongue.

“Inspire me“, now the lips do murmur
searching for but one more reason to forget
this deed on oneself of deeper murder.

Only the wind does now plea
in this early morn
With a soft reminder of an existence still free.

[GottaHurt]

Yea, there's a poetry section here (http://forums.wtf.com/showthread.php?t=50&page=2&pp=10) . You gotta open dem eyes girl ;)

[_Kitana_]

Yea, there's a poetry section here (http://forums.wtf.com/showthread.php?t=50&page=2&pp=10) . You gotta open dem eyes girl ;)

alright opened eyes...

didn't see we had a poetry thread going already

[GottaHurt]

alright opened eyes...

didn't see we had a poetry thread going already

No biggie, you gotta kinda dig around to find a few worthwhile things here.
You'll get used to sifting and learning to ignore...

[Broken]

No biggie, you gotta kinda dig around to find a few worthwhile things here.
You'll get used to sifting and learning to ignore...
yeah Just skip over anything I post.. you will be otay!

[_Kitana_]

No biggie, you gotta kinda dig around to find a few worthwhile things here.
You'll get used to sifting and learning to ignore...

or i will just create my own lol...we need a libary forum here...one to post writting and poetry... some of you sound like you would be great fucking writers..

[GottaHurt]

or i will just create my own lol...we need a libary forum here...one to post writting and poetry... some of you sound like you would be great fucking writers..

...and you can be da sexy librarian in the red skirt and tight sweater.....

[_Kitana_]

...and you can be da sexy librarian in the red skirt and tight sweater.....

lol don't think that would work. I am not calm and quite enough to work in a libary...

[darksinner]

hey nowback off she is my sexy librarian in a tight skirt and sexy tight red shirt
growl yum


yum yum
:mfinger:

[magnolia]

I really hate people who don't know how to write poetry and yet still call themselves a poet. I mean i may not be the best but at least my poems have some style and structure to them. What the hell is with these 5 mins poems with simple words and basically poor flow... at least read a poem once in your fucking life, before you try to write one...
:mad:
I wish I could write poetry. It's something I've always wanted to do but was never able to do well. Ur lucky.

[_Kitana_]

hey nowback off she is my sexy librarian in a tight skirt and sexy tight red shirt
growl yum


yum yum
:mfinger:

Mr.Sinner

Don't make me break out the whips and chains

[Halfpintrocker]

Hey I got some Poetry and stuff PM if you want any stuff. I would really like to know what you thought of it.

[Black Flame]

i haven't posted any of my shit on here yet.. but i'm planning to. they're mostly lyrics though, i usually have a bit of a structure for them i suppose, but most of the time i just write and it will usually end up sounding alright.
btw.. i have to find a poem to analyse for summer school english class, have any suggestions?

[Blazed]

i only right poetry when im wicked depressed :mfinger:

[crazyking158]

:gun: IM sorry Kitana_ but im gonan have to say you a complete moron on this subj, poetry is about self expression, so gives if someone does abide teh "guide lines " writing, if we all did that, then it be the same fucking shit, you know its ok to step outside the fucking box and think up new shit once in a while

[Pachyderm]

When writing on here I guess you are subjecting yourself to good/bad critisism. So what comes next is not a personal attack. Kitana, I gotta say, your writing is slathered in unexcusably bad prose. Many of the stories I have read of yours are thick with imagery and metaphors that hide the exposition and the meaning behind you words. Your stories and poems are deep in concept, but do not flow very well themselves. Poetry can be as simple as a quote from a random person or as complex as a Hemmingway book. I guess you can define poetry in your own mind but, remember, it is not a fact, it is an opinion.

[Shurikane]

I sometimes do poetry but I ironically hate structured form with a passion. Since most of my poetry tends to be flow-of-thoughts more than anything else, it will inevitably have a weird rythm to it and pretty much little to no structure or rhymes. o_O;

[_Kitana_]

When writing on here I guess you are subjecting yourself to good/bad critisism. So what comes next is not a personal attack. Kitana, I gotta say, your writing is slathered in unexcusably bad prose.
Yeah I have to agree with you alot of my writting is like that... its not ment to be set up in a prose....

Many of the stories I have read of yours are thick with imagery and metaphors that hide the exposition and the meaning behind you words.
Nah. My meaning is normaly pretty simple its that I want you to feel, taste touch and hear every part of it. Sometimes though they get over flowery and thats when i take the weed eater to them.

Your stories and poems are deep in concept, but do not flow very well themselves.

I am pretty hard on myself when I judge my own writting but i do have to say that above anything else my poems and story have a great flow. Publisheres who have been much harsher then you my dear. that was the one thing good they had to say. More people like my writting style then hate it. Is everything i write good... nay... i wrote a lot of shit in my day and still do.

[QUOTE=PachydermPoetry can be as simple as a quote from a random person or as complex as a Hemmingway book. I guess you can define poetry in your own mind but, remember, it is not a fact, it is an opinion.[/QUOTE]

Poetry can not be define in any way shape or forum. Poetry is the feeling of the writer that gets delievered to you the reader. Its that emotion thats inside of you....its what brings you to tears, makes you smile or just remember your still human and alive. I chose to write in a complex way of imagery cause a lot of times when I read a book I miss that. I want to know the exact way tree looks... those little details that i feel.

if you like more simple, less flowery stories or a mix of both or just plain out don't like my writting, awesome. I write for myself but your the type of person I try to improve my writting for.

[Pachyderm]

I am reading The World According to Garp by John Irving. I am not very far along but it is a really good book, and books are usually where I get my writing technique (when I do choose to write). Anyay, I have found a quote (my new favorite quote) I find it really interesting and very similar to my own beliefs about the world and man.
" 'In the life of a man,' Marcus Aurelius wrote, 'his time is but a moment, his being an incessant flux, his sense a dim rushlight, his body a prey of worms, his soul an unquiet eddy, his fortune dark, his fame doubtful. In short, all that is body is as coursing waters, all that is of the soul as dreams and vapors.' "
It doesn't have anything to do with your writing, but I find it really inspiring and thoughtful.